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Posted by : Unknown Minggu, 22 Maret 2015

I Dream a Dream


Everyone should have dreams. My name is Eka Nur Devita Putri. I am 19 years old. I will tell you about my dreams. When I was in elementary school until I sat in senior high school, my dream was only one. I just wanted to be a doctor especially a surgeon. I’ve ever wish that I could be a loyal public civil servant one day.

After I graduated from senior high school. I took an opportunity to try medical faculty in one of state university in Semarang but I failed. I still wanted to be a doctor and tried to the other, it was a private university. A week before I registered, my mom told me that maybe I could change my dream to take economics or the others because it was cheaper and faster than medical faculty. I was so confused for few days because I didn’t find another what I wanna be. Then I made a conversation with my oldest nephew who studying abroad in America as tax accountant. He agreed with my mother that I supposed to be a doctor, it would need much money and time while I still have two little brothers sitting on junior high school and elementary school. Then, he gave me two choices, be an accountant or pharmacist.

Now, here I am. I am part of Accounting C class at Semarang State University. I have been changed my dream and I found the new one. I wanna be an auditor or a public accountant.


I prefer to choose public civil servant because I think that be a businessman is the last choice if there is no chance to be hired. I want to save a little piece of my salary to build a social house or mosque then. Since I was child I always want to be a person who have means for another. I believe that known for her/his kindness is better than known for her/his wickness .


                    This is the office that I dreamed in the future.


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  1. Eka, the work is good, your tenses used was appropriate. To paragraph 3 should "Now, I am ...." just do not need no sentence "Now, here I am". Thank you.
    Please give me feedback on taks my dream :)

    BalasHapus
  2. Eka, your project is really nice, but it must be better and explicit when you write your favourite office. "elementary school, senior high school" it will be perfect when you use capital character in the first word. With pleasure :)

    BalasHapus

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