my dream

Posted by : Unknown Minggu, 22 Maret 2015

hello, my name is Napa Apiani, i will to tell you about my dream.

Since I was cildhood, I wanted to be a doctor, because the medical profession is cool. They can help people and treat the people sick. When I was Senior high school , I took science majors but at the time I did not choose medicine when I was participate in the selection of SNMPTN I because my parent did not allowed , with the reason the cost of medicine was expensive. and I chose the other majors, but I did not qualify of SNMPTN selecsion and I felt so sad. I was afraid disappointed my parent.

when I learned SBMPTN , test questions of sicience was so difficult. and when I followed try out of SBMPTN I working on science and Social, and the results , The value of Social was better than the value of science, finally i decided chose Social and Alhamdulillah I received in accounting majors, Semarang State University. Now, I want to be an accountant.

I prefer to be a civil public cervant because that is wishes me and my parent. After I became the public civil servant and get money I want to open a restaurant and become enterpreneur.

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Zuliyati21 April 2015 pukul 06.43
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Zuliyati21 April 2015 pukul 06.44
I think your sentence is good.
Thank you.
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Unknown22 April 2015 pukul 10.44
Hi Napa, I want to your taks.
I think this sentence " I will to tell you about my dream" is better ("I want to tell you about my dream")
"They can help ...."( "They are can help...")
sorry Napa, I do not understand this sentence "I took science majors but at the time I did not choose medicine when I was participate in the selection of SNMPTN I because my parent did not allowed , with the reason the cost of medicine was expensive.", please mark descriptors so easy to understand. thanks napa :)
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Unknown23 April 2015 pukul 03.53
Hay napa... The sentence "i will to tell you about my dream" should "I will to tell you about my dream". Then after the colon should use a capital letter and at the end of the sentence marked point.
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Unknown23 April 2015 pukul 14.28
ok, thank you zuliaty, novita and eka for your corrections :)
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Unknown24 April 2015 pukul 02.24
Napa,I hope what you want and aspire goals achieved..............................
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