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Rabu, 22 April 2015
My
Dreams
My Name is Muhammad
Nashiruddin, you can call me Rudi. Now, I’ll tell you about my dreams. When I
was a kid, I wanted to become a policeman. Why I wanted to become a policeman ?
this is the answer, I often see crime experienced by others. I really hate
criminals and I want to eradicate them. I think, being a cop is like a super
hero who help others.
I’ve grown up, I will
realize my dreams of becoming a policeman. When I graduated from high school I
participated in the selection of police brigadier acceptance. However, I failed
in the physical test acceptance police brigadier. I was very disappointed.
My
parents really understand my feelings. So they provide the best solution to me.
My parents sent me to college and majored in accounting. They told me to study
at Semarang State University. After following the selection of new admissions,
I am very happy because my name listed in the list of new students who pass the
selection. Now, I’ve been studying for two semesters. I hope to become a professional accountant.
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BalasHapusAfter sentence "After I graduated from high school", if you give sign coma (,) it will be better Rudi :)
BalasHapusThanks for your correction, but I think the sentence is correct.
HapusHello Rudi. What the awesome dreams! Let me give you some question please. What about your job challenge out of Java? You will take it?
BalasHapus