Jumat, 27 Maret 2015
Hi~ My name is Difa Maya Sari. I am 19 years old. I’m from
Semarang. I want to tell you about my dreams. When i was kid if you ask me
about what’s my dreams? I said that i would be a doctor. As time passes, i knew
that to be a doctor i must saw blood everyday. I can’t because it’s too scary
for me.
Then, i changed my dream. My dream is become an public accountant
or goverment accountant. So, i take accounting to got bachelor in college.
After i graduate, i will try to send my application letter in goverment office.
Thats’s just the beggining of my dreams. After work for 4 or 5 years, i will
have a lot of money. Then, i will start my business beside my job. I swear to
my self that i will make a restaurant to my parents. I must work hard to make
it happen. After i success be a businesswoman, i will marry a guy that i love.
I will start to have a little family. i
also want to make my parents happy and i will take my family to Makkah for
“umrah” or “Hajj”. All this dream based only to
worship to Allah. I hope all this dream be come true. Amin
Thanks Difa.
BalasHapusWhat do you think of "an public accountant", what is wrong with this noun phrase? Should you use "an" or "a"? :)
Ahh I see. It should "a" so it will be written "a public accountant". I think it just a typo mrs. Thank you for visiting my post :)
HapusWhen i was kid if you ask me about what’s my dreams?
BalasHapusI think you don't use lowercase but you must use uppercase and be more careful in writing sentences. Example : " When I was kid if you ask me about what's my dreams".
You're right. I think I didn't careful about the punctuation. Thank you :)
HapusDifa Maya Sari : "I can't because it's to scary for me." maybe you should give commas like this "I can't, because it's to scary for me" and "worship" should give "k".
BalasHapus