Kamis, 26 Maret 2015
MY
DREAM
Good
morning mom, I will introduce my self. My name is zuliyati, in here I will tell
you about my dreams. When I was kid, my dreams was to be a doctor, I think
can’t be in fact because I choose vocasional hight school don’t senior hight
school. I have other dreams, Sometimes, I want to be nurse, stewardess, police
woman, businessman, lectures, finncial minister, accountant and other
interesting deams. However, I have grown up. Now, I know what I wan to be.
At
this moment , I almost finish my graduate in semarang state university. I will
bachelor of science accountant. After I graduate, I want to work in one of the
biggest companies such as Indonesion Bank, Internal Revenue and etc. I want to
be the Staff Accounting, Staff Manager or Manager at least. I prefer working
offshore to work in the office because it gives me challenge and good salary.
That
just beginning of my dreams. After I work for 4 or 5 years, I will have a lot
of money. Then, I will start of Business. I will buy 4 or 5 shops and run my shops. Further, I
will have another business such as Restaurant and servant registri office.
After I run my business, I will to take my family to Makkah for ‘umroh’ and
‘hajji’ and than i will go to around theworld. I think that is all i can say
about my dreams.
WHAT
DO YOU PREFER, BEING A BUSINESSMAN OR PUBLIK CIVIL GOVERMEN
I am choose both
Business and Civil Goverment, because I wish success in business and Civil
Goverment. I like business because its can give me challenge and improve my
skill about business and I can open the occupation for everyone its can
decrease about joblessness. I like Civil Goverment because I don’t think
everyone , I don’t think about benefit, expense, employee and other. I am focus
for my job don’t about business. I think In this moment I think Civil
Goverment. I think that is all I can say about my prefer being a business or
publik civil goverment.
I think you should check your word in the sentences above because I find some words that I think its not correct, such as: vocasional, hight, finncial, wan, etc. Its should be typed "vocational", "high", "financial", "want". And you should use capital character correctly because I find that you write "i" not "I" in some sentences. I think the correct typed is use capital character "I". Its just my correction I'm sorry if my correction is wrong.
BalasHapusThank you for your comment. I will improve my error sentence.
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BalasHapusmy correction : in here I will tell you about my dreams = here I will tell you about my dreams. I choose vocasional hight school don’t senior hight school.= I didn't choose senior high school, I chose vocasional high school. Now, I know what I wan to be. = Now, I know what I want to be.
BalasHapusthank you for your comment. I will review again and I will improve my sentence. thank you
Hapusamin.........
BalasHapusI hope you achieve the dream, fight and continue to pray.
zuli there mispelled word. example
theworld should the world.
moment , should the moment,
makkah should mekah,
and what do you mean by "servant registry office"?
zuli, you write about how to achieve your dreams.
Thank you eka.
Hapusservant registry office = kantor peumahan.hehe
I will make achieve my dreams with learning.
Zuli, I hope your dreams come true........
BalasHapusAmin. Thank you solekah.
Hapus