Selasa, 21 April 2015
Heloo, my name Nurma
Sari, you can call me Sari. I have a lot of dreams. When I was child, my dream
was to be a teacher, and as the time goes by I have other dreams. Sometimes, I
want to be doctor, a singer, police woman and other dreams. But, now I have grown
up, I know what I want.
Now I’m carrying out my
college. After I have graduate, my first dream I want to become a succsesfully
enterpreneur and generate a lot of money. Challenge that I want to implement is
to build cities langging with many creating jobs like my mother land “Merauke”.
I hope sometime thats really happening. Maybe it’s not easy, but I will give
the best.
My second dream, I want
to get a grand master of chess like Bobby Fischer and the other grand masters, it’s
hard to do but I will always strive to achieved the dream. Chess is my life,
because I’m really happy when I playing chess. I don’t know why, when I playing
chess my mind felt something fun thats make me always playing, paying, and
playing without felling boring. Chess is not going to die in my heart and my
mind. Pawns are the soul of chess player as pawns never walk backwards, I want
to be pawns because they are always move
forward and face without a backward.
The last of my dream, I
want to become drawing manga and create a comic people liked. I love to read
comics and lately I learn to draw manga. I think manga a work that will not be
exhausted by imaginasi it describes. Drawing it’s not easy, it takes special
skill in making an object.
Thats is just the
beginning of my dreams. After I work in my business, I will have a lot of
money. Then I will run my shops. I want to take my family to Makkah for “umrah”
or “hajji”.
I want my dreams come
true and I’m sure to be able to realized that dream, I know my dream will come
true with hard work. Just a dream thats make us work hard and sacrifice
everything. Dream like a millions of stars in the sky, they are many and so far
but only a few bright stars among other stars. And careers that can beat
passion: aligns with what you “values”, is in line with your “interest”, used
your “skill” and ”talent”, support your “ambitions”. From now I will do the
best for my dream. It is just a simple dream for a simple girl like me. Thanks
for attention guys.
I choose to being a
businessman because I like economic life. Economic is very interesting to
learn, we can built a country with a good economy. I want to be businessman
because it can create jobs for the unemployed, I wanted to give a salary not
received salaries. Therefore majored in
accounting at university so I was able to compete.
Wow, your dreams are amazing. I hope your dreams come true.
BalasHapusThank you Muhammad Nashiruddin, I can only say Aamiin.
Hapusmy name Nurma Sari,
BalasHapusplaying, paying, and playing
imaginasi
Are you sure??
OMG, I just realized what you mean. I would replace the word.
Hapus"so I was able to compete". (last paragraph)
BalasHapusare you sure it is a past tense?
Difa Mayasari, it's not past tense, I mean without using "was" and I wrong to write it.
HapusWow, your dreams are really good. I hope you can reach your dreams quickly. But I think you should correct your sentences again because I find some mistakes in your work. For examples: in the second paragraph, you writed "succsesfully" and I think the right word is "succesfully".
BalasHapusIn the third paragraph, you writed "playing" for three times, I think you can write it for one time so it can be efficient.
And I want to ask you about your dream in the fifth paragraph, you want to run your shop, aren't you?
What kind of shop that you would like to build?
yeah, you right Risna.
HapusI want to build a cake shop, because everyone loves cake including me. Altough I really can't make a cake, but I will continue to learn to bake.
Thanks for your comment.